sobdo chhoTe nijer chhonde

sreyashi · 25-05-07, 12:47 AM

amader modhye emon ekjon sodosyo achhen, jini osadharon kobita lekhen.
ami tar kichhu kobita porechhi, bhison bhalo legechhe ,tai forum sodosyoder
sathe share kore nichchhi----Alokanandar kobita
apnader onekeo nischoyi kobita lekhen, tara o nijeder kobita ekhane rekhe jete
paren---apnader chhondo sobar mone dola dik, nuton kore bhabte sekhak.

niladribagchi · 26-05-07, 01:46 PM

osadharon kobita duti

kolkata · 30-05-07, 12:38 PM

rag chilo taomar dui thote
pora swapno ekhono matha khote
momer aloy dekha khwato
choto kono kabitar mato.

neon er alo ,bhalobasha khay
samay akre dhore asamay
momer aloy dekha khwato
choto kono kabitar mato.

sreyashi · 30-05-07, 01:07 PM

Kolkata

khub bhalo laglo kobitaTa. aro likhun.

kolkata · 31-05-07, 11:18 AM

buker bhitor brishti chilo ashanta jhamjham
hriday pure khank hoyeche byartho monoshkam
chokher taray agun chilo,agun chilo thote
nadir jole ban eseche hriday tire lote

kantha bhara garal niye,neshay akhon matya
bipajjanak agun amay puriye kore shakto
agun chilo,fagun chilo,akhon purche amar deho
du ek phota chokher joler bharsha diye jeyo.

niladribagchi · 31-05-07, 12:18 PM

WOW! Kolkata,tumi osadharon likcho.ro chai tomar kache.

niladribagchi · 03-06-07, 11:08 AM

Duhat vore neowar ache amar,
deowar ache- ebar tomar pala,
chitkar kore bolar chilo amar,
stobdho thaka ebar tomar pala,
herechi onek aposh korechi bole,
tumi jitecho ami herechi bole,
ebar ami aposh-hiner dole,
purtei hobe tomar ebar-agamir dabanole.

vebechile tumi nebe lute- pajorer itihas
vebechile tumi-kandbo ami,
ami kannar dash.
tobe bole rakhi-vebechile vul- ebar amar pala
rat jaga pakhi pa ghostay
karbe juger thala..

sreyashi · 03-06-07, 12:52 PM

''....ekla praner kotha niye ekla e-din jay ki ...' ---

kashibhatta · 08-06-07, 01:01 AM

ke bale adhbhut aandhaar?
aamraa aalokito, ebong chamatkrito.
shabdo satyi peyechhe nijer chando, chhutchhe...

alokananda · 09-06-07, 12:54 AM

rat jaga pakhi pa ghostay
karbe juger thala..

'ranga sahosh chhilo naki chhoTo thonTe...'
bhalo laglo,apnar lekha aro poRar ichhe rakhi.

25-05-07, 12:47 AM	#1
sreyashi Bondhu Join Date: Sep 2006 KS$: 2,021.31 Forum Bank: 2,111.18 Total KS$: 4,132.49 Donate Rep Power: 10	sobdo chhoTe nijer chhonde amader modhye emon ekjon sodosyo achhen, jini osadharon kobita lekhen. ami tar kichhu kobita porechhi, bhison bhalo legechhe ,tai forum sodosyoder sathe share kore nichchhi----Alokanandar kobita apnader onekeo nischoyi kobita lekhen, tara o nijeder kobita ekhane rekhe jete paren---apnader chhondo sobar mone dola dik, nuton kore bhabte sekhak.

26-05-07, 01:46 PM	#2
niladribagchi [ Community Liaison ] Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: howrah KS$: 1,169.00 Forum Bank: 699.84 Total KS$: 1,868.84 Donate Rep Power: 5	osadharon kobita duti __________________ CHENA DUKHO CHENA SUKH THINK GLOBALLY, ACT LOCALY

30-05-07, 12:38 PM	#3
kolkata Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2007 KS$: 604.00 Forum Bank: 500.00 Total KS$: 1,104.00 Donate Rep Power: 2	ekta choto baje kabita rag chilo taomar dui thote pora swapno ekhono matha khote momer aloy dekha khwato choto kono kabitar mato. neon er alo ,bhalobasha khay samay akre dhore asamay momer aloy dekha khwato choto kono kabitar mato.

31-05-07, 12:18 PM	#6
niladribagchi [ Community Liaison ] Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: howrah KS$: 1,169.00 Forum Bank: 699.84 Total KS$: 1,868.84 Donate Rep Power: 5	WOW! Kolkata,tumi osadharon likcho.ro chai tomar kache. __________________ CHENA DUKHO CHENA SUKH THINK GLOBALLY, ACT LOCALY

03-06-07, 11:08 AM	#7
niladribagchi [ Community Liaison ] Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: howrah KS$: 1,169.00 Forum Bank: 699.84 Total KS$: 1,868.84 Donate Rep Power: 5	Duhat vore neowar ache amar, deowar ache- ebar tomar pala, chitkar kore bolar chilo amar, stobdho thaka ebar tomar pala, herechi onek aposh korechi bole, tumi jitecho ami herechi bole, ebar ami aposh-hiner dole, purtei hobe tomar ebar-agamir dabanole. vebechile tumi nebe lute- pajorer itihas vebechile tumi-kandbo ami, ami kannar dash. tobe bole rakhi-vebechile vul- ebar amar pala rat jaga pakhi pa ghostay karbe juger thala.. __________________ CHENA DUKHO CHENA SUKH THINK GLOBALLY, ACT LOCALY

30-05-07, 01:07 PM	#4
sreyashi Bondhu Join Date: Sep 2006 KS$: 2,021.31 Forum Bank: 2,111.18 Total KS$: 4,132.49 Donate Rep Power: 10	Kolkata khub bhalo laglo kobitaTa. aro likhun.

31-05-07, 11:18 AM	#5
kolkata Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2007 KS$: 604.00 Forum Bank: 500.00 Total KS$: 1,104.00 Donate Rep Power: 2	buker bhitor brishti chilo ashanta jhamjham hriday pure khank hoyeche byartho monoshkam chokher taray agun chilo,agun chilo thote nadir jole ban eseche hriday tire lote kantha bhara garal niye,neshay akhon matya bipajjanak agun amay puriye kore shakto agun chilo,fagun chilo,akhon purche amar deho du ek phota chokher joler bharsha diye jeyo.

03-06-07, 12:52 PM	#8
sreyashi Bondhu Join Date: Sep 2006 KS$: 2,021.31 Forum Bank: 2,111.18 Total KS$: 4,132.49 Donate Rep Power: 10	''....ekla praner kotha niye ekla e-din jay ki ...' ---

08-06-07, 01:01 AM	#9
kashibhatta [ Community Liaison ] Join Date: Oct 2006 KS$: 916.00 Forum Bank: 500.00 Total KS$: 1,416.00 Donate Rep Power: 4	aalokito, chamatkrito ke bale adhbhut aandhaar? aamraa aalokito, ebong chamatkrito. shabdo satyi peyechhe nijer chando, chhutchhe... __________________ kaar taate kee aamraa jodi ei aakaaleo swapno dekhi

09-06-07, 12:54 AM	#10
alokananda Registered Member Join Date: Sep 2006 KS$: 774.00 Forum Bank: 699.84 Total KS$: 1,473.84 Donate Rep Power: 3	@niladri rat jaga pakhi pa ghostay karbe juger thala.. 'ranga sahosh chhilo naki chhoTo thonTe...' bhalo laglo,apnar lekha aro poRar ichhe rakhi.

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