alokanandar kobita

[sreyashi]

NET--biplobider jonyo


pizza ebong chayer shathe
durodorshon chhobi
amar ghoroni beerbhogya
ami ghor biplobi !

news channel e hochhe prochar
sms protibad
internet e upuR korechhi
futonto motobad

rokte barud,bondhe mojut
paniyer bhandar
shompadokio kolam e korchhi
shomaj shongoshkar

tarpor phone pouchhe jabei
shohokormir baRi
amar lekhata beRiyechhe aj
poRe phel taRataRi

ontor theke chaichhi
shanti phiruk nandigrame
dighar hotel book kora achhe
grishmo chhutir khame

[niladribagchi]

Dear alokananda,
Apnar lekha kobitati path korlam,sabdo choyon,vasar dokhol,chondo,loy sob dik thekei eti onobodyo.sei jonye apnak sadhubad janai.kintu priyo aloka apnar lekhar bisoyti nie amar kichu bolar ache

Nandigramer akromon o tar poroborti protibad sob amra dekhchi,dekhechi,amar moto kichu kotipoy subidhabadi manush amar netermadhyome A.C. ghore boseo protibad rekheche.Hoyto ochirei dighar tickettio katbo karon samne berate jaoar ayojon korbo je.kintu tobu nami nete apnar ei kobita path korar poreo otyonto dukher sathe janachi ami kono sikhya nite parlam na,ami abar nete A.C. ghore bose protibad korbo,pizza ba mcdonalder burger khete khete.
Alokananda apni protibad bolte ki bojen,jodi janan khub valo hoy.apnar mote nandigram jodi ekmatro protibader hatiyar hoy r tar jonye rasta ghat ochol kore sadharon manuser durvog kore chitkar ekmatro protibader hatiwar hoy,tobe ami tar bipokhye bondhu.aj na hoy nandigram,kintu kixchudin age sisu haspatale hatya,fulbagane gonodharson o ityadi seguli ki vule gelen bondhu?amader mul udesyo sudui ki chada tola r nandigramer manushk dewa taholei ki sob kaj furie jay?jayna.asol samosya prosasonik tai agami nirbachone nischupe voter daripallay sarkark felte hobe,setar jonye chetonar unmesh chai,obossoi slogan,meetingo chai karon ei sakal somosto kichui chetonar unmeshe ek birat vumika palon kore.
Alokananda,juba samaj eto din je bohulangse ghumie chilo seta to manben aj jokon sei jubo samaj ghum thekte jagte suru koreche tokon tader jagie ralkhte hobe agami nirbachon obdhi,seta meeting,michil ba neter madhyomeo hote pare.ajker urban jubo samaj neter madhyomei jogotk chinte chay tai sekhane jodi tara protibad rakhe o tar somorthon pay,tara ujjibito hobe bolei amar mone hoy,ajker jubo samaj sobai je pothe name na setao asa kori apni janen,karon ajker jibon jotoi bolun byakti kendrik hoe utheche,sekhane aj jokon manush likche,se netei hok ba smse ba kagoje tate doshta kothay,take keno byango ora?
aj ami nije prothom prem korechi nete,amar sob theke priyo bondhu net theke peyechi,sekhane ami keno nete protibad korte parbo na.amar mone hoy apni protibader dhoron nie besi chintito,protibader thekeo.
Manoniya apnar kache jor hoste onurodh banglai jubo samaj jagche ,se neter madhyomei hok,college campaigner madhyomei hok ba kagoj pore tar ei jagatar pase thakun.se pizza khete khete jagche na nisan hate nie seta boro kotha noy,tara jagche setai boro kotha.daya kore sei jagoroner dhoron byango korben na ,boroncho manushk jagie rakhun jate vote manush tader asol protibadti rakhte pare.
Valo thakben.

[sreyashi]

@ Niladri

ebhabe aynay nijeder sotyikarer chehara dekhe antke uThte nei!!!

ei kobita je apanar sob motgulokei protisTha kore gelo, protibader sarthok
kobita hoye , seTa ekTu bhebe dekhun.

alokananda noy , amar bhalo legechhe bole kobitaTi ami post korechhi , tai
uttor ami dilam. Osadharon ei kobitaTi bhalo kore poRe nin pls abar.

[aloke]

bhalo kobita nihsondhehe ...! daarun laglo.kobita tir mul sur er songe amio ekmot.

Asha korbo Alokananda puro byapartekei generalised korchhen na .. pizza'r songe protibad er kono shotruta achhe ki ??

[aloke]

Originally Posted by niladribagchi

asol samosya prosasonik tai agami nirbachone nischupe voter daripallay sarkark felte hobe,.

@niladri tumi nischhoi eii rajyer bortoman birodhi dol-er tokhon khomotay asar katha bolchho na ?? ami bolte chaichhi..bortoman sorkar porey gele..oops mane fele diley...tumi kader dekhte chaichho eii rajyer niyonta hisebe ...??

Tomar chetona ki boley???

[alokananda]

kothao bodh hoi kichhuta osposhtota roye gechhe.ami amar lekha(?) ba karor lekhar i bishleshoner pokhhopati noi,tobe ekhetre bishoy ta nichhok sahityo noi ,nandigram, tai koekta kotha bolte hochhe.
ami internet ba onno kono madhyom ke chhoto korte chaini,rajnoitik shochetonota proshare tader obodan ke ami jotheshto gurutto die thaki.
nandigram er ghotonar por bohu manush tader shojotne lalito ‘apolitical’ tokma chheRe beRiye eshechhen eta amader protteker kachhe drishtanto. porichito bhablesh heen konthoshhore protibader notun shobdo uchharito hochhe!tara pizza khelen na French fries chibolen sheta nitantoi gouno. gonojagoroner proti kotakhho korar moto rongin chokh amar noy. kintu er modhyeo keu keu shudhu atmoprochar ba shartho sidhhir tagid theke protibadi chehara ta joRiye nichhen.je cheharar na achhe shottota na achhe sthayitto. shei bhejal biplobi der kotha kono ekta agochhalo emotion theke likhe phelechhilam.Generalization er kono proshnoi othena.
thik jemon thakte ichhe kore thakar cheshta korben

[niladribagchi]

@alokananda,
apnar ei explanation onek kichu poriskar kore dilo,dhanyabad.apni je kothata bojate cheyechen ,bujte perechi,eta to tobu thik je sob jaygay beno jol ache,ta ekhaneo ache,tate r dosh ki?beno jol niyeo cholte hobe,chutmargo na rekhe.
@ aloke
Dadar kothar sutro dhorei boli,'ora sanache ostro/aro khub hobe aro/bachte chao to sasok dolk votei nahoy maro/ek jot ho bondhu/ekjot thako sob/birodhi joter jorei oder porajoy samvob'
ei birodhi amra sobai.eta satti amio janina sei birodhi jot kemon hobe,tobe etuku jani ei sarkarer theke valo hobe.r ei birodhi amra sobai dol,mot nirbisese.palte dewar agei jodi nana prosno ase tahole r kono din paltate parbe na bondhu,jemon eto din paltate parini.eta to manbe 30 bochor khomotay thaka gonotontrer poriponthy?
@ sreyashi
hoyto nijer protichobi dekhchi tai gorje uthechi,kar bolo aynay nijer ei bikrito protichobi valo lage.kintu tobu dekhte hobe,tobuo protibad korbo.kono vabei protibader theke sorbo na,se je vabei hok protibad.

[sreyashi]

hoyto nijer protichobi dekhchi tai gorje uthechi,kar bolo aynay nijer ei bikrito protichobi valo lage.kintu tobu dekhte hobe,tobuo protibad korbo.kono vabei protibader theke sorbo na,se je vabei hok protibad.

protibad theke ekdom sore jeo na!! tobe tomar pulisher bonduker bodole chumur protibad-er ideata sob cheye bhalo !!! bibhinno bhabei protibad hobe, tobe eTa THE BEST !!! ar nijer protichchobi dekhle aynar opor na gorje nijeke arekTu bhalo kore sajiye dekho, thokbe na!!!

[aloke]

@alokananda, apnar lekhay abar chomotkrito holam..besh bhalo laglo..apnar lekha aro kichhu kobita eii forum-e dekhte pabo..eii asha rakhi...

Originally Posted by niladribagchi

eta satti amio janina sei birodhi jot kemon hobe,tobe etuku jani ei sarkarer theke valo hobe

Eta ki tomar biswas naki upolobdhi ?? khub bhalo hoy jodi tumi aaroketu bolo je ki k bhabe tomar mone hoy ei sorkare thekeo bhalo hobey. thik kon kon factor kaaj korchhe tomar eii statement er modhhey.

Originally Posted by niladribagchi

eta to manbe 30 bochor khomotay thaka gonotontrer poriponthy

nah , bondhu eta mante parlam na ..30 bochhor kyano 300 bochhor holeo na, amar to mone hoy jara 30 bochhor khomotay achhen, tara to ar jor kore khomotay nei, tara protibar ekta gonotantrik pokriyar moddhey diye nirbachito protinidhider niyei khhomotay achhen.

ektu bujhiye bolbe thik kyano 30 bochhor khomotay thaka ta gonotontrer poriponthi??

[SimplyRoy]

Originally Posted by sreyashi

NET--biplobider jonyo

pizza ebong chayer shathe
durodorshon chhobi
amar ghoroni beerbhogya
ami ghor biplobi !

ontor theke chaichhi
shanti phiruk nandigrame
dighar hotel book kora achhe
grishmo chhutir khame

Best Part: The poetic rhytm.
Mind Blowing: It's content .. very innovative!!

Hats off to Her[Alokananda's] immagination!

Best Expression:"grishmo chhutir khame"